"The bullet-riddled body of the former NFL quarterback had been found slumped on a couch, with two bullets in his torso, and one in each side of his head."
http://www.digitaljournal.com/article/280826
The AP Error I spotted in this article was that there is a misplaced comma. The last comma in the sentence above should be removed. Additionally, I believe that the sentence should be rewritten to make it flow better.
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